Mighty Aphrodite

Chapter Five “What the hell was that , Max?” Jonas growled at the air in front of him. Landon, who had just yanked the curtains shut, looked tense by the ...

lol~Sorry that Ness is kind of picky. But, I mean, if your mom married a guy you didn't like, would you be happy? I know I'd be putting up a ...

Chapter Four Jonas slowly pulled his car over to the side of the road at the cop’s direction, muttering words under his breath that Landon, who was sitting in the ...

It'll get better, I promise. Just need to get some background info in there somewhere... I'm glad you like it so far! Jen

Once again...if you haven't read the previous chapters and the prologue, do so now! If not, I promise that you'll be thoroughly confused. :wink: Thanks! Chapter Three The plane landed ...

Hmm, I wonder how that stray [/i] got in there? lol. NO! lol, I know that you do like it!! Haha, it's constructive criticism. THanks, especially, for the whole bit ...

Actually...I like this. I think it has a lot of potential. For the most part, it's well-written, but there are some things that can be improved. In the first paragraph, ...

I think you have a good start here, but there's a few things that you should look out for. First, punctuation. Most of the mistakes are minor, but I'm anal ...

*Note* If you haven't read the Prologue or Chapter One, please go to my portfolio and do so now! You'll get a better understanding of what's going on, and chances ...

Chapter One Ness’s bed bounced up and down as if she had just fallen on to it. She sat bolt upright, her heart pounding and body drenched in sweat. A ...

Well, my favorite website of all time is Writing.com, and there was a link to this site on one of the pages there. I decided to check this site out, ...

It's not that I'm going to ignore anyone's points, or whatever, but I think if you read the first chapter (which I'll post soon!), you'll get a better understanding of ...

First off, I think this is really interesting. I think you could really make this great, but first you should fix a few things. This speaker sort of makes me ...

Wow, those were quick replies!! Haha. To Icaruss--yup, I'll review your work! Just give me a few minutes to figure out how to find it! Haha. To areida--20,000 words is ...

Hi! My name's Jen and I'm a sophomore at Allegheny College in Pennsylvania. I'm double majoring in creative writing and history, and I plan on writing books for teens/young adults ...